All Comments on 'Second Meeting with a Surprise'

Did you realize the same story is told 3 times?

Nope. It’s rape.

Hard to please everyone. Some people like and others don't. Someone didn't like when I wrote something completely different.😄

delete the previous edits from the story

The storm repeats itself three times.

Yes I have written similar story before but changing persons and action a little bit. It has been a nice play for me because something like that has actually happened and it have been nice to write alternative happenings to the same start.

Needs much more editing help. That being said I enjoyed the story, it is rape and maybe a warning beforehand for those who aren't into those stories may be helpful. I hope to see more of what Sam and these two get into again.

Yikes... Could read it after the first couple paragraphs. Sorry... Hone your craft before subjecting it to the masses.

Is Samuel X his English language editor? This even worse than any of rampe's earlier stories