All Comments on 'Secret Admirer Ch. 04'

You're very insightful, and the story's coming out beaitifully. Suggestion; in future chapters, change "led" to "laid"; it confuses me every time I see "led." Otherwise, the prose is excellent.

i know thats probally not what you want to hear, but this is such a cute, hot and real story. i hope you continue.

I really enjoy your love stories. Are you out there still writing? It's been over to years since your last posting. It would be great to see more. Best wishes, A Fan

next?????

Um, yeah: next part PLEASE?!!

Please try to find the time to finish this series. I like the way you handle your characters, their caring and sensitivity towards their families is admirable.

This is one of the most romantic stories! it's so cool that everything is working out so well and that they are both able to have good relationships with their children.

Hope you're able to post the next part of the story soon.

Happy writing!!!

good story, i would love to read an end... though i have already imagined a happy one... thanks

Love your story and y know life gets in the way but would so much love to read the next chapter :) Hope to read you soon and that you are well and happy

It's been a few years...PLEASE finish....

loved it but waiting for more i could be dead by then.....xxx

We demand more!!!....pretty please :)

WE ARE STILL WAITING FOR A UPDATE.? PULL YOUR FINGER FROM UP YOUR ARSE AND GIVE THE PUBLIC WHAT THEY WANT NOW.? LOL X X X X X

So I'm assuming this wont be finished?

Don't think there's any hope for this story to ever be finished but still i keep hoping.

I think you're right. I sure would like to see more. Much more.

How could you end it here???!!!!

Hope you find your way back here and finish this story. It was very good