All Comments on 'Secret Desires'

Great threesome! Nice build up! Good read!

I jumped over here. Gina & Jessica have just gotten on the bed. I wanted to pause to write about it in anticipation, & see if I am right about their pleasure together. You make a vivid picture, Inspirinious. I like exploring this way, & taking my time....

Thanks for all the positive comments.

@lovelover - I hope the second half met your expectations.

Yes, it was good, everyone giving to everyone else, & enjoying their own turnon as well. Seemed like they did whatever they felt like w ea other, and it was good. Liked the delicate restraint at the end, when Gina let them be. LOL: when do the girls yell, "Oh, Fuck!" and when "Oh, God?" Look forward to reading more of your work.

Yes, it was realistic I could see how they were inexperienced in organising a threesome and it was believable how Gina recognized what they were doing and volunteered without being too obvious! The description of the subsequent sex was great!! I thought initially that Aaron would get first bite, but the way it happened was more true to life- now waiting for more!!

@ Anonymous "I loved it"

Thank you for the comments. I really appreciate the feedback.

I am working on the sequel. It will take me a while as I tend to rewrite a lot to improve the plot, the flow, the realism, and to include lots of sex. It's nice to see that people appreciate my efforts.

I have to say this was one of the best stories I've read in a long time. You gave us enough characterization for us to buy into the story, the set up and introduction worked very well and the sex scene....simply wonderful. I haven't check what if anything else you've written but based on this story alone you've been added to my favorites.

Thank you

This was an outstanding story of a first time threesome for all three participants

with powerful sexual descriptions that greatly exceed the usual stories on this site.

Please keep them coming!!

Hopefully based on a truer story

Your story almost put me to sleep' Just to long for me.

Great topic, and remarkably impressive writing.

What a fantastic read. You have an excellent writing style and clearly put the effort in to make sure it is as mistake free as possible. Also a very plausible and well described account of a first time threesome. I read it easily picturing the scenes in my mind. Well done and only hope my first efforts will be close to this level which I am currently near the end of writing. Looking forward to reading the next two parts.

Just what the title said

One of my all time favorite fantasies. Really enjoyed this and am moving on to the next chapter!

Well written. Very sexy MFF threesome story with good character development and some very hot scenes where the wife enjoys being touched and seduced by another woman for the first time. Looking forward to the rest of the series.

This is well written. Character development and discerption was well done, and the erotic tension of the story folded in nicely. My first experience with your work and I must say that I am looking forward to reading more.

My, what a recipe for an extended sexual romp!, between three great friends…mutual pleasure given freely to all three. My, what chance do I have of duplicating that…it would be a dream!

Hubby and wife each fulfilling their fantasy of a threesome.

Thanks for that !