All Comments on 'Secret Keeper Ch. 04'

by WhimsicalEroticist

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
mixed up

he is, will be doing mother and I guess did her sister or half sister. strange tale

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
wtfe

No protection,, no nothing about pills,, so not much doubt in my mind the sick fuck will be doing his daughter as well

VagabondxVagabondxalmost 10 years ago
Solid story!

I really enjoyed the entire story... Not 100% that it's over (and would love to see this continued!) but if it is, I just wanted to let you know I enjoyed it!!! I think some people read these stories assuming stuff like this occurs in real life. I read to be entertained like going to the movies. And when reading literotica, I'm reading for sex, not real life, not necessarily the perfect plot... Just a good story that goes somewhere and gets me hard in the process!!! And this chapter story did just that... Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Enjoyed it - another mention of contraception would have made it more realistic

An entertaining read, for sure. There were a couple of continuity errors, like the 'disappearing condom', but it was a gripping tale, which left me feeling glad I had read it.

I would love to see more parts to the story - maybe Wendy and a Rae share Ian, if Rae came home early, and then lived happily as a threesome?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Looking forward to more

Keep up the good work

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