All Comments on 'Secret Lust Ch. 01'

More, please!!!

You have a pretty good sense of pacing, but the proof will be in a more detailed narrative. I can hardly wait.

would like to read more.

thanks

To me it’s just average right now I can see it tuning into a complete good story, but thanks for writing it’s more than I can do!

Continue this please

Please continue

Can’t wait for the next chapter

Fascinating

Any more coming?

I wrote part two yesterday! Just be patient and you'll have a much lengthier and kinkier story.