All Comments on 'Secret Lust Ch. 05'

I finally got some of my answers, the's mess psychologically! LOL! Some of the narrative is a little rough around the edges... kind of incomplete, spotty thoughts. However, the writing in general was solid. I would love some background on how he got so messed up, but that's for another day. Thanks for the read.. 4*

I had hoped it was more than just sex

He comes across as a selfish scheming exploitive asshole. He has no redeeming features at all..

She deserves way better than this prick can give.

Drops a point, simply because I dislike his character framing.

4/5