All Comments on 'Secret No Longer Ch. 13'

by ShadowWriterCa

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
please please PLEASE

let us hear about that party!

if we have to pay the piper with endless agonizing and recriminations in the next chapters, we want to be sure we get *all* the pleasure we will have to pay for.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I've not been checking posting dates but sure

Go ahead and expand upon that lift and dress loss deleted from this story.

BTW I am agreeing with you concerning sexual sequences. Dropping one and leaving your reading audience wanting more was a better direction for this story to take. Keep writing!

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