by ShadowWriterCa
let us hear about that party!
if we have to pay the piper with endless agonizing and recriminations in the next chapters, we want to be sure we get *all* the pleasure we will have to pay for.
Go ahead and expand upon that lift and dress loss deleted from this story.
BTW I am agreeing with you concerning sexual sequences. Dropping one and leaving your reading audience wanting more was a better direction for this story to take. Keep writing!