All Comments on 'Secret Pleasures'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Too hard to read

I quit reading before half way through. Too stilted and difficult to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I enjoyed it as my mom used to tease me & put on a show for me but never came onto me or let me touch her.

Rocketman51Rocketman51over 3 years ago
Good start!

I enjoyed the journey, hope to see more of these two! Maybe invite the cousin over for a 2 on 1. Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
he was

he was in fact a gigolo fucking all the women he was teaching to play tennis, but yet, when it came to fucking his mom he could not take the hint when was jacking off and she caught him, (playing pocket pool)..... she sucked his cock and he came right away and did not try to hold off? then he continued to act more like his cousin Billy and her sister, Tania with the virgin son..... and yet Alex after getting a blow job from mom still was not motivated to fuck her even if she would have said no??? What's wrong with trying? Now who sounds like a virgin and mom had even given him the go ahead!!! wow your story line failed to capture the imagination..... a good start for a first time high school-er you lacked flow for a good story .......sorry but build on your idea before you put it on paper or at least read it after you write and before you publish.... no star for you on this one

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I came too quick too, so didn’t finish it

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Love mom son Incest the best. Nicely written. Got hard n horny reading it.

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