All Comments on 'Secret, Saintly Schoolgirl Love'

Beautiful

Young love vs. religious oppression. So nice that Barb was there to help out! Well done.

Characters jump off the page vivid in my mind's eye. Description's in the boat house vivid in anyone's mind that has mastered bringing a woman to orgasm initially fingers in pussy foreplay then skillfully with tongue.

It was such a wonderfully sweet story. I absolutely loved it.

You could have placed this in the "First Time" category. You have captured, brilliantly, the first flush of teenage discovery. What is most amazing is that your two main characters are actually making love. What a magnificent observance of Saint Valentine's Day. Absolutely 5 stars.

It started out sooo slow, but like so many good things rushing just wouldn't be right. Once Barb got on the paddleboard it all came together so beautifully. St Barb sent by God(dess?) to bring lovers together. Perhaps a new holiday!

A complete short story, well drawn characters, beautiful scenario and description of sexual awakening.

Superlative writing.

This is easily the best story I've ever read here. The characters felt absolutely real as well as the world they inhabit.

Fantabulous! Thank goddess!

What a beautiful story. Thank you.

Would love to see a part 2 for this story!

A really great story to read Kathryn, and best of luck in this years comp.

This is so sweet.

No hesitation in giving this 5 stars

Great story, very sweet.

Absolutely brilliant! It was imaginative, subversive, and altogether delicious. Thanks for the enjoyable and thought-provoking read! An east 5 Stars for me!

I am a man, and I have a friend that I have known for years and I ache for him in this way.

Beautifully told. It's only a short story but I feel I got to know all three characters in that short wondow. xx

Sooo sweet, and respectful of the supposed transgression of the two young ladies. You handled a very delicate situation with compassion, allowing Hannah and Naomi's curious innocence to guide them into and through the unknown territory of Sapphic love, leading their fumbling efforts to the desired consummation of their young love. Barb was a hoot, and a true friend to recognize the attraction between the two classmates and recognizing that this day dedicated to St. Valentine was the perfect moment to help give them the space to be together undisturbed. If Hannah and Naomi started their own church, I would certainly love to be part of their congregation in the Church of St. Valentine. Thank you for this breath of sweetness in our troubled times.

A beautiful, wonderful story.

Great story, well thought out tale of innocence

"Cripes"

"abso-heckin'-lutely"

"eff you"

her 'secret bump'

and when she logics out the concept of 'fingering'.

Such lovely attention to detail. This is very good work, Kathryn. Be proud of your accomplishment.

Oh, and also I'm amused by Naomi (and, one assumes, Hannah) completely missing Barb's suggestion for a threesome.

"Except, you know, by enthusiastic mutual agreement".

Very good work

Full of sense far from sex details

I enjoyed and reenjoyed of every detail and conversation.

Love the story.......now determined to read more of your offerings.

I went to a boy's boarding school. I shared a moment with my best mate which to this day remains one of the most intense, erotic experiences of my life. That was 30 years ago. I've been with my wife for 25 years and have 4 beautiful grown up children and grandchildren.

Reading this story took me back to that 15 minutes my mate and I spent together in the boot room in the dead of night.

Describing the heightened awareness of surroundings, self doubt and fear of being caught or doing it wrong to describing the utter urgency of wanting the moment to be special for Hannah.

This is without doubt one of the most erotic stories I have read on literotica.

Thankyou