All Comments on 'Secret Santa'

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hindsight2020hindsight2020over 3 years ago

Great build up for something interesting. Unfortunately, the reveal was not up to the build up.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 3 years ago

A thoroughly enjoyable story. Every company needs an Abbie, but alas, far too few have one! 5* ~~ JBE

charlie48charlie48over 3 years ago

Wonderful, a sequel please.

Keep writing and a little longer to maintain the suspense.

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Happy to be sharing stories people enjoy reading. Enjoy reading stories other people like to share. Story suggestions are welcome. As is conversation. If I have a character you like, what mischief should they get up to next?