by DerekCartman
Bad sex. Boring sex. Plot interesting. Who is the President? Is he even human? When the plot is more interesting than the sex, maybe the writer should consider writing non-erotic fiction!
Early on, her "double-d"s are the cause of her getting so much attention. Two paragraphs later, when being frisked, she has a C-cup, and isn't overly endowed. Part of this kind of writing is forming a mental image, and hers seems to change a lot.
Keep at it!
Good, fun story.
Would be interested in a sequel if you have a mind to do one - especially if Paige returns to her original Double D glory. :-)
BUT it's getting super repetitive. I get it you like tit fucking and throat fucking. Can WE get a little more please?
Don't worry about all these people complaining. Write stories that YOU enjoy. people that share you loves will find you and enjoy them too. its not like you're getting paid, so write for yourself. I know i do!
I hope you won’t forget about her. She should be ready for her next case soon.