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LilacOpheliacLilacOpheliacover 4 years ago
Great story but slight inconsistency

Love this story so far, but as someone already mentioned Nora being in 4th grade is way off. That would make her 9 or 10, much older than you've portrayed her. It initially says shes 6 so she'd be in kindergarten or 1st grade depending on her birthday.

JoyfulwishJoyfulwishover 6 years ago
Mmhmm

Just what I needed on a rainy day

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nora

I love the story overall but you've written Nora like she's 5 or 6. Now you're saying she's 9? She's around 60lbs and 4'6" tall. She likely wouldn't be in a booster seat in the car and certainly people wouldn't bend down to speak to her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
If I didn't know better...

I would swear you were watching me and my Sir to write this scene.

Perfect!

And like Alex, I could never go back to vanilla.

Crazy_ChristineCrazy_Christineover 8 years ago
Thank you Sir

For like Gavin; you never fail to pleasure me.

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
Oh . My . God!

I love it when the wolf comes out to play. So needed to ease the tension of Nora's 1st day.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
thank you

this is what I need to read a great story please don't make it take so long for a nother ch one of the best

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 8 years ago
Thank you so much for this update!

This is my favorite story, and I check religiously daily for updates. Just in time for my birthday, Happy birthday to me! Again, thank you.

Missy10256Missy10256over 8 years ago

Amazing as always. More typo's than usual.. (usually there is none!) I love this story..keep up the amazingly great work of art.

wish2basubwish2basubover 8 years ago
About time! Thank you.

Love, lust, caring, concern, slapstick, and guffaws! Almost worth the wait but don't make us wait that long again.

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