by CJT
Love this story so far, but as someone already mentioned Nora being in 4th grade is way off. That would make her 9 or 10, much older than you've portrayed her. It initially says shes 6 so she'd be in kindergarten or 1st grade depending on her birthday.
I love the story overall but you've written Nora like she's 5 or 6. Now you're saying she's 9? She's around 60lbs and 4'6" tall. She likely wouldn't be in a booster seat in the car and certainly people wouldn't bend down to speak to her.
I would swear you were watching me and my Sir to write this scene.
Perfect!
And like Alex, I could never go back to vanilla.
I love it when the wolf comes out to play. So needed to ease the tension of Nora's 1st day.
this is what I need to read a great story please don't make it take so long for a nother ch one of the best
This is my favorite story, and I check religiously daily for updates. Just in time for my birthday, Happy birthday to me! Again, thank you.
Amazing as always. More typo's than usual.. (usually there is none!) I love this story..keep up the amazingly great work of art.
Love, lust, caring, concern, slapstick, and guffaws! Almost worth the wait but don't make us wait that long again.