All Comments on 'Secrets Ch. 05'

Just read your first and last post back to back. And honestly I see improvement. VAST improvement. But please, formulate better stories. Even these short ones end up leading no where and take 3 mins to read. Just devolop your characters, and get some back bone to your stories. The dialogue is still sub par. There’s very little description of anything. Also. A chick with two pussies? Really dude?