All Comments on 'Secrets Of The Stallion'

Yet another new writer storming in with a knickers-dampening tale on an already boiling hot day! I'm going to pass out through ecstasy overload if there are many more like this one!

Wonderfully naughty -- brilliantly told. Welcome, thank you, five stars -- and more, please!

The story itself is good. However multiple spelling and punctuation errors detract from the story. I would suggest finding an editor.

Your bent toward realism inspires this comment: Don't BDSM players avoid toys that have been used by others?

Otherwise, enjoyed the ride!

Even hotter than the role play I remember, if that was even possible. Fabulously written down, wonderfully executed and very powerful. Loved it. Orgasmically Powerful :P

Cant wait to read the next chapters. Please publish them soon.

Congratulations on your first story. Well Done You.

Well done Stone, 5 stars from me.looking forward to more.

I love the story and the characters.

Well done Stone_Rhine!

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peeled the paint off my walls, and forced me to call the fire department to put out the flames! Props to your 3 friends who encouraged you to write it and to you for a job well done ... very well done!