All Comments on 'Secrets of the Suburbs Ch. 02'

This defines free love we have long for since the 60s

Did the dad have to be so dumpy? The moms are uniformly hot but the two dads on the block are wrecks.

That was a very hot seen really like the sister riming the other . It's ok that the dad is a bit dumpy as long as he has a big cock . Hope to read the rest of this story soon .

I was about to offer comments on how to improve your writing, but I won't now. Unlike me, you seem to have no desire to write stories that sell, so I'd say you've accomplished your goal. You have produced a very sexy story and I gave you a 5. Looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters. cd

The 1st part was great, this second part was really great. I'm looking forward to the next three parts.

It's beginning to look a shame that this story is only spead over these 5 parts. I feel that I'll need more and more of this community of Incest lover's.

waiting with baited breath - on the next chapter ... :)

I loved the first two chapters. I can't wait until chapter three!

Cant wait to see what happens next.

I wish I was there to witness this hot action myself. Ummmmm

Great story. Can't wait for more.

Bring on part three that was amazing!

Understanding your writing philosophy makes reading and enjoying your stories more enjoyable. Not bad atall !

so fun watching others making love, especially if you have not done it yourself,,well written,,well paced

You are wrong in your belief that your readers would prefer faster, rather than well edited, stories. First, we have no idea when the stories will be posted so a day or two certainly does not effect your ratings. Second, if you look at ALL of the top rated stories they are well edited. It is very frustrating to continually have to back track because a word is used incorrectly, a sentence doesn't make sense, or a word is misspelled. Do us and, more importantly, yourself a big favor. Take the time to do a better editing job or enlist a good editor.

Addictive, heading to the next one