All Comments on 'Security Detail'

I highly enjoyed it. And today I learned Claire Hogle is a real golfer. You did a good job of describing her elf-like beauty.

I do like this. It is perfectly paced and well written, just the idd typo but that doesn't detract from a lovely story. \i think it would be better placed in Romance. Very well done.

Nice - quite nice. Lit provides an amazing forum for exploring human sexuality and relationships. How wonderful that some of those stories have such happy endings - nice - not bad at all.

Thanks.

Noice! Loved it.

Beautiful as always. Thank you

Very enjoyable and warm story.

Sweet characters.

the parting time made me cry!🥲😭. love this story

Beautiful. Being in erotic couplings I was expecting the walk away to be the ending. Great story, nicely paced and well written.

Interesting characters, fun story. 5*

Another great story. Maybe your best to date. And only a few grammatical errors. I’m still available if you want an editor or beta reader.

Warm, loving, quirky. Overall good character development. Wish there was more though. Would love to see them overcome the schedule differences and become stronger as a couple.

Awesome story. 5 stars. And I like it happened in Cincy

I really enjoyed this. You drew Claire as flawed and quirky, but down to Earth and dogged. Loved her butchering an Asian accent to worm her way into his condo, and you injected realism by fhe crazed fan stalker. While it is unlikely they would be together, most can suspend belief with how cute it ended up by the dialogue you developed between them.

Some odd errors like "fare enough" interrupted an otherwise enjoyable read. Try to erase more of these. For the overarching content, 5.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Nice!

I love the interaction between the main characters. The story is also enjoyable. I like it very much.

Awww this was really nice! Great job!

I loved this story. The dialogue between Ryan and Claire was great. Funny, romantic and very erotic! ;-p” I’m so happy for the way you ended it. Thank you for writing such an entertaining story.

Good read! The LPGA doesn’t feature in many other stories, which makes this one stand out for me, I also liked the idea that she was a relative newbie, still only thinking in terms of revenue gained from Insta etc which would come from camera time, not actually believing deep down that she could be there as a potential winner, the only glitch I saw was the sudden reveal of the stalkers name and his subsequent exit, which, given the menace you’d built up seemed to be rushed.

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers, Ppfzz. 5⭐️

5 stars!! Loved the story, wish it was longer.

You were able to balance superior character development, good plot and dialog with a reasonable length. So many Romance stories end up 7-10 pages long and although some of them are worth wading through, many are disappointing. 5*

I loved the story but you never mentioned if he or they ever did watch the movie she compared him to in the beginning (the Bodyguard movie). Loved how it ended too. Makes me want to believe true love really does still exist.

Excellent story! Your description of Claire reminded me of LPGA golfer Laura Baugh from years ago. Laura got rich making appearances especially in Japan.

Beautiful