All Comments on 'Seduced Aboard a Cruise Ship'

Author tells about his sex life

BUT NOTHING OF THE TITLE TO THIS STORY

I GAVE IT A ZERO RATING....READ PART OF

THIS CRAP IN A WOMENS MAGAZINE

This was a very erotic fantasy but it got a little far fetched as it got further into the story. The most erotic part was at the beginning where he was describing the first time he cummed inside her pussy and saying that it was heaven and that she could feel his hot cum shooting deep inside her pussy.

I know that some women can feel a man cum but don’t know that all can. So that struck a large note of reality with the story. I am sure that those women that do feel a man’s cum shoot inside them get a greater satisfaction out of their love making especially if it is at nearly the same time that she cums.

The author should have cut the story off after the first swinger discussion.

great story, well written and drawn out, to give the whole context...very hot seduction at the end

Best read ever you feel like your right in the room with them. I had to read in two installments for obvious reasons

Pity you don’t write more!

ED I read it per our chat today Very arousing. Perhaps a part 2 sometime

ED

Excellent read, Eddie!