All Comments on 'Seduced by My Captor Ch. 01'
by Anna_morningstar
- 10 Comments
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoA very tedious read. You have the bones of a very interesting story but you have teased the reader too many times with unresolved questions. Your sentence structure is very stilted, also, which contributes to the tediousness of the story.
Try to resolve some of the issues in future installments and i think you will have a better read for us, but at this rate the mystery man is just an asshole and the gal is a fool, making the story less readable.
I hope to enjoy further parts of this story.
A Treat
Anna_morningstaralmost 7 years agoAuthorThanks for letting me know your thoughts about my story but don't worry all the unanswered questions will be answered. And about my style of writing, I will try and improve it. BTW the second chapter will be posted within three days. Keep reading and commenting. Cheers!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoYou are off to a great star. Hope it is as interest as you have started.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoI have searched high and low for the perfect erotica that has a touch of danger but not so much that it kills the mood or gets way too weird or down right horrifying . This is perfect . It leaves the reader wondering if this just might turn into a vampire love story. I want to see the rest of the story ! Great job. Oh and did I mentioned that I am frustrated now because I need to see the ending ! Lol
Anna_morningstaralmost 7 years agoAuthorI am glad that you liked it. I hope I keep this up interesting
Anna_morningstaralmost 7 years agoAuthorThank you very much mate! I'll be posting the next part soon. Hope you like it as well. Cheers!
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoFinally, a kidnapping story which doesn't start with rape or intimidation. Thank you for making it sweet. There is so much potential in this story so, please don't stop working on it. Try to upload asap and then try to keep the uploads frequent.
Waiting for more,
Anonymously loving it.
Anonymousover 6 years agoLove this story. When are you posting the next chapter? Please hurry!!!!
Anonymousabout 5 years agoGod damn it! Why do the good stories that are named Ch.01 never have a chapter 2? Instead there's all this disgusting filth that some sick author makes a dozen chapters on. It's not fair.
