All Comments on 'Seduced in Style'

I really enjoyed this story and found myself disappointed when it came to an end. Please tell me that part 2 is coming soon?

The idea was good but the execution was not. The dialogue was stilted, the plot moved too fast, some things were preposterous like 4 inch areolas, clinical language like scrotum, testicles, and penis. I suggest getting an editor and giving it another go.