All Comments on 'Seducing Anita'

Now this is how to write a good story, the build up was very good, you could almost feel the love and understanding was great as well

Amazing story

You have such a talent for writing the most wonderful stories and this one is no exception. Thank you.

Love your attention to detail in both action and dialogue. One feels like they have been in that house, listening to that conversation. Your stories are like good music.

As ever, thank you.

Thank you. A lovely story about a woman helping another find her true self amid the ashes of what she was raised to believe. It's an amazing feeling when the truth cuts through. You captured it beautifully.

Really well written, pleasant to read stories that are not filled with unnecessary "nastiness ". Looking forward to reading your other pieces.

Not contagious, just coincidence... although Anita's good Reverend Dad (closet gay?) would probably consider it enemy action (ref: Auric Goldfinger in the James Bond novel). Another good story, Shaima. I guess there's no holding you now.

Dear Shaima, you continue to produce works of such a standard somewhat above the rest of the writers here.

Mind you if you keep developing characters from each story the whole of Melbourne will be gay.

Very well done! Thank you!

Generally I liked it, but the word "genitals" seemed overused. Women have so many different bits that have on-point descriptors, branch out a bit more so we can get a better feel as readers for what you have in mind as the writer.

that word was definitely over used. also a bit rushed.

A very decent story but not my favorite by Shaima

I really enjoyed this one, thank you for sharing, and please keep them coming!

Just what, exactly, was 2017 to you? This many stories in one year? Do you have any other life?

Another brilliant story, thank you.

Read Swedish story first, and that set an impossibly high bar. Also this one seemed to have underlying hostility, maybe cause of Xinanity issues.