by bamaguy64
it was ok..Dom/Sub is not my thing..wished you warned me their was this sort of stuff in this story
Chapter 4, was hot as hell. Chapter 5 was hot, then it started getting redundant with the constant sex, then you hit S&M and that kind of turned me on, but then started getting boring, but once you got to the point they glued tits on him, that was it for me: I stopped reading and jumped to vote. I am so done with this series no matter if the following chapters are as hot as chapter 4.
It started good and ran below zero.
It doesn't match to the rets.
Love your writing. Glad you found a site where you can express such things. I am on here as bane469.
I absolutely loved the first four chapters. I especially loved when you started on that master/slave thing, which you went away from again, but that was okay.
This chapter started okay aswell but then...
I was utterly dissapointed when you started on than femdom-tranny thing.
Had it been in the story from the beginning, that would have been fine.
I wouldn't have read it, but hey, each to their own.
But to take such a great story and then molest it with something so far off the track it had been running along, that was just horrid
I really enjoyed the first parts of the story very much. The crossdressing ruined it for me. Sorry, just not into that, please list it in the appropriate category in the future.
I'm not a fan of that kind of thing, but I can appreciate someone that is willing to turn a mother/son incest story into one. That takes a bold sense of humor. Kudos.
The fem-domme, crossdressing and feminization of Joe completely ruined this story. HUGE TURN OFF after how the first 4 chapters progressed. In this chapter Joe Should have dominated his mother and aunt for having sex without his permission. He told his mother she was to have sex with no one but him in earlier chapters a couple times. Joe should have put them in their places for betraying him like that instead they turn him into a fucking sissy boy. I tried skipping over it thinking maybe Joe would take control but that crap lasted right to the end of the chapter. Sarah and Mary should be whipped with a belt till they pass out for what they did in this chapter. A note at the beginning of the chapter warning readers about the change of direction should have been provided and this chapter should have been in a different section than incest.
i completely agree with the comment 10/16/10 .The previous 4 chapters were brilliant then you had to ruin it with this 5th chapter,SUCH A LET DOWN
This was such a get story in the begirning, but you totally srewed up the whole thing up with this chapter. HUGE turn off not really sure if I even want to read the rest
Extreme and way out! I did not enjoy reading it much. It's your story but I did not care for it. I just wanted you to know. Pointless in a way, to me.
This part was stupid. I don't care how much he wanted his mom and aunt, what they did was dumb and I would have told them no chance. If they are that fucked up, then say goodbye because that shit isn't going to happen.
Sorry, but going from a Dominate personality to meek accepting submission? Going along so easily? Don't buy it and a real turn off. If you had *something* in the story of them convincing him perhaps I could buy his switch.
But just "okay" and going along? Nah. This chapter is regretfully a very bad one.
Just how do you think anyone could possibly believe this you're either a woman who hates men or some kind of candy assed pussy
so far this fetish has been really retarded and over used in this chapter of reverse dom
Does Mary hide behind Sarah? If so, in the interest of honesty, she should have let him know. If I were him, I would tell them to fuck themselves. This chapter sucked.
Sorry, but I hated this chapter because I'm not bi or a switch.
What the fuck were you thinking what you wrote in this chapter is going to let women think that they higher than a man women were put on this Earth to serve men not the other way around
What were you thinking, you virtually fucked this story up with this shit. ⭐️
I didn’t give this story a score I won’t knock someone’s imagination in that way. This chapter is awful. He told his mother what he wanted an she agreed to it they later changed the game but it was agreed upon. They didn’t offer him an option. He never tortured his mom yet they were doing things to him without prior consent. And the cross dressing is just wrong. This was a really good story till this chapter. I hope it gets better again.
The author has done some rresearch on Dom/sub relationship. The twist in this story was the "switch" of Joe. This is useful for an inexperienced Dom. The Dom should know both sides of the lifestyle. 5 star series.