by Vishal1990
Loved your set up, your long slow build. Just one small criticism, I don't buy her touching your dick in the theater at that point in the build up! Just seemed too fast or out of place for me. Other than that, superb!
You built up the story very well. Please continue in this vein.
Very impressive, how the story evolves from a chance meeting to seduction. Loved the two pigeons on the balcony bit. Waiting for chapter 2. I hope it turned out well for both of you. God bless.
As a former hijabi, I totally and completely loved your story! Rubina is a very lucky lady. Muuuah!!
What a story. It is true that muslim women are more satisfied with hindu men. Good going.
Thank you, it was one of the most beautiful stories I've read for a long time. Hope we get to see more of your work.
Gyönyörű történet, végre Rubina is érezhette, hogy egy szeretett Nő, megérdemelte.