All Comments on 'Seducing Muslim Beauty Rubina Ch. 01'

by Vishal1990

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

You're a great storyteller! I really enjoyed this.

WardPikeWardPikeabout 3 years ago
Great story (one minor quibble)

Loved your set up, your long slow build. Just one small criticism, I don't buy her touching your dick in the theater at that point in the build up! Just seemed too fast or out of place for me. Other than that, superb!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great read!

You built up the story very well. Please continue in this vein.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great going.......please continue

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Very well written.

Very impressive, how the story evolves from a chance meeting to seduction. Loved the two pigeons on the balcony bit. Waiting for chapter 2. I hope it turned out well for both of you. God bless.

AishaMuhammadAishaMuhammadabout 3 years ago
Loved it!

As a former hijabi, I totally and completely loved your story! Rubina is a very lucky lady. Muuuah!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

What a story. It is true that muslim women are more satisfied with hindu men. Good going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Very well written, loved the flow and the build-up.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you, it was one of the most beautiful stories I've read for a long time. Hope we get to see more of your work.

kivancsifancsikivancsifancsiabout 1 year ago

Gyönyörű történet, végre Rubina is érezhette, hogy egy szeretett Nő, megérdemelte.

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My name is Vishal, a software professional in India's software hub Bangalore. I am with a company that works on cutting edge technologies which I really enjoy and the pay packet is good too, so I can enjoy my life outside of office, more of which I will describe in my stories....