All Comments on 'Seducing Sheila Pt. 01'

...not in the storyline or the writing but in the fact it was so short. I turned happily to page 2 and just a couple of lines. Oh woe is me! As for the writing, Anna, your usual good standard and the plot-line is promising and intriguing. I for one would be pleased to see more of this story so keep it going.

and yes you should write a 2nd chapter

Hi all,

We are working on part 2. We had a marathon writing and editing session this morning. We decided to publish this teaser to see if there was enough interest for us to carry on.

We were rated "Hot" until recently and we just dropped below 4.5. Sad face.

Hugs all

Anna

xxx

Very nice tease

I truly enjoyed this introduction and truly hope there is more to come.

More of this story, more of your writing. Just more of everything.

I definitely want to see the next part. I hope there will be more chapters to come.

This was a perfect tease. I like how you are building the story. Very promising.

And I'm eagerly awaiting part 2! Thanks for sharing this with us!

Anna, you are such a tease. Promising so much and yet giving us so little. Its a very good job I already love you and your writing otherwise I'd have struggled to give you even one star. As it is I give you 5, because I have faith in you and I know that part 2 (and many subsequent parts) will more than make up for things. Let's all hope it is not long in arriving.

You have really hit the mark with this. Loved it. So real and so vivid.

Delicious writing as usual. I am already searching for the next installment.

I just loved this, it got hotter and hotter. I love your writing.

This chapter forms a perfect scene-setter. Everything about the way Sheila enters the story flows so naturally: from the opening scene with Karen (putting what follows into the context of Anna's professionallife and its pressures), to her going to write at the coffee shop, to her asking Sheila to mind her laptop while her resulting full bladder drives her to the loo... in a beautifully crafted narrative in which each development comes as a natural follow-on from what's come before.

The appearance of Dot and her quickly sketched character, and the role she plays, is a lovely touch, reminding us that there is a wider living context and background to the interplay between Anna and Sheila. The way the engagement ring prompts Sheila's declaration of her feelings, serves as a great turning point. And by the end of the chapter everything has fallen delightfully into place with perfect naturalness and vraisemblance, with with some delicious sex to look forward to as soon as Anna gets Sheila into the house, and with the added cliffhanger of wondering how things will go when Jodie arrives back on the scene. . It's all beautifully done - and all in your wonderfully flowing narrative prose.

No tears this time but as good as ever. Tempted to read Parts 2 and 3 straight away but sticking to my ration.

I don’t know but if I were faced with an engaged person who essentially invited me to their bed, I would go running. A better approach would have been for the two to develop a friendship first and then bring in the threesome teaser.

Lovely beginning. 5 stars!