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"We will," I said.
We finished our drinks, picked up our things and headed out of the pub, fully aware of Dot's curious eyes on us as we left for the cottage Jodie and I called home...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 2 years agoI don’t know but if I were faced with an engaged person who essentially invited me to their bed, I would go running. A better approach would have been for the two to develop a friendship first and then bring in the threesome teaser.
diana11almost 4 years agoNo tears this time but as good as ever. Tempted to read Parts 2 and 3 straight away but sticking to my ration.
maribel_falmost 5 years agoThis chapter forms a perfect scene-setter. Everything about the way Sheila enters the story flows so naturally: from the opening scene with Karen (putting what follows into the context of Anna's professionallife and its pressures), to her going to write at the coffee shop, to her asking Sheila to mind her laptop while her resulting full bladder drives her to the loo... in a beautifully crafted narrative in which each development comes as a natural follow-on from what's come before.
The appearance of Dot and her quickly sketched character, and the role she plays, is a lovely touch, reminding us that there is a wider living context and background to the interplay between Anna and Sheila. The way the engagement ring prompts Sheila's declaration of her feelings, serves as a great turning point. And by the end of the chapter everything has fallen delightfully into place with perfect naturalness and vraisemblance, with with some delicious sex to look forward to as soon as Anna gets Sheila into the house, and with the added cliffhanger of wondering how things will go when Jodie arrives back on the scene. . It's all beautifully done - and all in your wonderfully flowing narrative prose.
Pixiehoffalmost 5 years agoI just loved this, it got hotter and hotter. I love your writing.
