All Comments on 'Seducing the Landlady Pt. 01'

Great start. Please make the chapters longer than a one page teaser.

Please continue with this; it looks as if it could be a winner. So far, it's nothing much more than a tease. Welcome, new author, and thank you. More please -- three stars.

not long enough to make me remember to look for future chapters

A good (but not great ) start. You didn't "set the hook" for me. I'm gone.EC17

Too damn short!

Shorter than I expected but I don't have a problem with that, Sometimes there is just too much padding but you kept it simple and fitted everything in that needs to be there.

I like a cliff hanger and will try to keep an eye out for the next installment, be great if you could send a reminder.

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I liked how the story went so far but it needs to be continued. I hope the next chapter comes soon. You described her pretty well and loved how sexy you made her seem. Good job for your first story.

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is that it?

Finish the damn story.