All Comments on 'Seduction'

by Ashson

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liz33ndliz33ndover 4 years ago
i really liked it, reotic short on worded detail, but my imagination was incredable

well written and so fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Tut, tut!!

Your Proof Reading is slipping!!

"... This last phrase of our little get together ..."

PHASE, not phrase!!

Otherwise, quite good!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 4 years ago
I always love your last lines!

I can imagine this happening. Beautifully told. 5*

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