All Comments on 'Seduction of Emma'

This is my kind of erotica. The story flows so naturally. The intimacy seems real. Keep it up. I look forward to reading your other stories.

Fantastic. Erotic writing at its best. PLease, please keep it up.

I enjoyed reading your other stories and was glad to see a new submission from you. Nice to see you back!

Great story; great writing. Just as I was thinking how selfish she was being, you turned the story to deal with that. Look forward to reading more of your work.

Great pacing, excellent dialogue, and the sex scenes... whoo-ey!

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was hot, with a lot of emotional depth.

The depth of what appears to be a wonderful relationship shows in your words! I enjoyed it immensely and will be reading everything you offer.

OMGS WOW; I loved your story! I practically came just reading it, I just pray that I get to be in a relationship like that..preferrably sooner than later.

Possibly the best thing I have ever read on Lit!

This story reminded me of how my girlfriend and I ended up together. Realistic story of how college roommates can get together!

An excellent story. Well written, well presented, great plot - the works. Well done!

Great to finally have you back. Don't be a stranger now :)

That was a great story.

Too bad the rating only goes up to 100! You deserve a 200!!!!

Excellent in every respect. A great story that captures the emotions, feelings and sexuality of two young girls. Very, very arousing. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and i am suer I cum back to it more than once.

Wow! I usually don't get too involved in lesbian stories but this one caught me in its web. Well done! Great depiction of emotions, doubts and fears that all same sex lovers must go through until they find who they are.

PW

Very romantic and erotic with exceptional writing. It was great how Natialie brought Emma out of her shell and introduced her into a wonderful exciting new world. Great job.

Erotica runs the gamut from vulgar to art. It is all good, and fulfills the needs of the writer and reader at whatever level they find themselves at the moment of need.

Your story was, simple put, at the art end of the erotic spectrum. It wove a story that was sensual, believable, and compassionate. Sappro love is not my first choice of erotica, but when I read a story as well written as yours, it's just wonderful.

it was yummy.

Too similar to the first story. Not original. Just a repeat. Also, supposedly the main character looked like Rose Mcgowan or Salma Hyak. These two actresses look NOTHING alike so how could the main character look like either one?

fucking amazing. i loved it.

it was sweet, full of love and passion. a good story pulls emotion from the reader, and you did a fantastic job of doing just that. It was a love story, not just a sex story, though there was plenty of sex! i loved it!

This is deffinatly my favorite! I love how real it sounds & ahh.. Write more! :) but anywhoo.. Great storyy.<33

now that is what i call a story. that made me feel so many different things... just wow. great job keep doing more.

not only was the story sexy, but it had a plot too. You're gifted with descriptions... I seriously almost came just reading it.

This was such an enjoyable read! The sex was incredible, and I enjoyed every minute of it (except, of course, the boyfriend parts). What started out as sex turned into love. So awesome. Kind of makes me sorry I didn't live in a dorm during college. ~ L

I became turned on as well. Touching myself, playing with my pussy trying to reach orgasm

One word AWESOME!!!!!!!!

I loved and I want the same for me

I am so hot I am going to turn the lights out and play with myself until a bust a nut

So good yes here she blows

Wow. I can't even describe it. Promise you won't ever Stop writing, I promise I won't stop reading.

Wow! This was hot wonderful please continue in this style

Thanks. It was straightforward and easy to follow. It's hard to find good stories in lesbian and first time genre written from the first person view of the female. This was great. I hope you come back and write some more.

So hot - I think this is how I experienced my first female sex. i was seduced at boarding school. kell

Most seduction stories are not really seduction stories just a lens finding another led or maybe a bit both looking to hook up. It was a great read. Seduction of a girl or woman who has never entertained the idea of sex with another woman takes time and patience. You did it right.

Love this story of Natalie and Emma getting along as roommates and having things slowly develop into Emma's Seduction and then the realization that Natalie had fallen in love with Emma. Very nice and slow build-up, great description of the beautiful sex between them and Emma's realization that it was time to break up with her boy friend. He was a distration to this story as Emma found herself enjoying the sex with Natalie more and more over the weeks. I do hope that you proceed with this story of sexual love between these two lovely ladies. More chapters would be great so we can see for sure how Emma reacts to Natalie's confession of love for her. Will read more of your stories. Keep the guys at a bare minimum for the future.

This isn't seduction. Emma clearly states that she feels the effects of the wine. Her "friend" Natalie sexually assaulted her. Another story describing a crime under the guise of seduction.

Great story.