All Comments on 'Seduction of Melanie'

What the fuck was this shit? Green eggs and ham, I suppose. Either way, it sucked.

Loved your story! Well written and kept me wet and wanting more ;)

That was hot! Well written. Please write a follow up. Thanks for the story :)

that was incredibly erotic. please, please write more! I need to know how far and how well it goes!

I have to say, I love this story. It's well written and erotic, and I can't wait for chapter two!

This is really HOT!!!!! More, please! :D

good story,really liked it. cant wait for follow up

I love this story, please update it with a new chapter!

Please add more... I wish to know what happens next..

You must keep us readers updated...as you must continue with this story...you made me cum shoot my load ....you gave me a rock hard cock !!!!

It's too bad you haven't written a sequel. I would love to read about Melanie's response to tasting unc's secret sauce directly from its source.

I would love to read the next chapter to this story

I would love to see more of this story!

More please

Id love to see how this continues, very well done. Please dont abandon this story.

Incredibly hot, but slighty disapointed we didn't get to see more of the build up.

Jesus I wish you would finish this. It is so good. 3 years edging us I think you could bring us to climax now..

We need more,obiously!!!