All Comments on 'Seduction of Tamanna Ch. 03'

Bad writing is bad.

from an Indian writer. One look at the names and the sub title tells you what you will get

This is really bad writing.

You're better off just fantasizing in your own head and leaving it that way.

It does seem that Indian writers have trouble with writing erotic stories in English. This is an example of really bad writing regardless of the subject matter.

The way the author writes his stories actually makes it better for me. It makes it more authentic somehow.

she should get pregnant with his child. he can also fist her asshole, and watch her pee

Monjo. Sounds like a character in Jungle Book.