All Comments on 'Seductive Stephanie's Debut Ch. 01'

...first story, please write more...

i found your story very well written and i enjoyed it immensely

i loved it can't wait to read more :-)

More Sections are Coming I Hope

If this is in fact your first story, you are a natural. Keep them comming.

The plot of this story is no great shakes, but the writer has managed to capture the interest of the reader.

This story is so hot and since your not really related makes it even more sexy

I definitely want to hear more of this stepdaughter getting royally fucked. Perhaps even get knocked up towards the end.

First of all, I think you need to find a different editor. Whatever she fixed in the first drafts, she left a number of typos.

Other than that, it wasn't a bad story. I've posted some "stepfather/stepdaughter" stories and that type of relatonship gives a lot of room for activities.

The only other opinion I have isn't about your story per se, it's about multipart stories. I never, or only rarely, read a second chapter. Unless the story is intended as less of a sex story and a more serious effort at writing, most stories on here don't really deserve repeating.

That's really what later chapters are, after all. Most people can only repeat their descriptions of acts between the characters. How many ways are there to describe intercourse that don't soon run to the ridiculous?

So please let your story stand on its own. If you want to attract more readers, simply post other stories about the same characters as new, not 'chapters' of the same tired story.

Inasmuch as Stephanie has chosen Daddy over Mommy to live with, perhaps she also wants to start a family with Daddy? And if Daddy accomodates her perhaps he can make another daughter with her that he can eventually begin fucking as well, and continue making babies long into his old age?

soooooooo good, almost 100% as i'm stuck in anticipation...i'll be seeking more soon!!

I can hardly wait for your next installment. I really like how you fleshed the characters out without making it boring, and how you didn't have them "doing it" right away. Great job!!!

Fantastic...cant wait for ur next installment!! felt like i was there watching it, so descriptive and kept me on the edge of my seat!! Please, please, please do another one!!! i'll be looking for u! xx caz xx

Very enjoyable, yes typos, but your first and like any good story/book I could not stop till it ended...... So when is chapter 2? I want to continue reading this to the end. Certainly got me stirred.....very stirred....

Loved the story and looking forward to more!

Great .. looking forward to a follow-up ..

more more plz made my panties all wet!

I have a stepdaughter that I would love to do what you just did to your's but in my case it won't happen except in my fantasy world. I so want to lay her accross my bed and hold her beautiful ass cheeks in each hand while burying my face and tongue into her pussy, I would think from what her butt looks like her pussy is beautiful too. Hope you write more. da.cd@frontier.com