All Comments on 'Seductive Witch and a Young Knight'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story!

Though I would love to see a sequel, I can still imagine that he returned to the castle to deliver the remedy, and as thanks he asked the queen to be relieved of his duties to pursue the love of his life. And he spent the rest of his days with Gail and their child/children in the woods where they first met and fell in love at first sight.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Just a thought

Hello TJ. Good for you in writing a story. It's a lot of work and you had the balls to publish.

Just a thought when you write a period piece like this with knights and dragons etc. Okay is from OK which meant zero killed in massages in the US Civil War (early 1860s). Doesn't fit in the century that you are trying to create. You might want to vet the words you're using.

That's only if you want some rules for your story. If you're having fun and don't give a shit about details like that then that's fine with me too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
continue it please

I would love to follow the story if you did continue it

Sensitiveknight43Sensitiveknight43over 5 years ago
Chapter

Please make a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
very satisfying story

mediveal age was fine for satisfaction

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More please

Lusty , funny and potentially a full novel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Next Chapter!

Please write another chapter!!

Lbqh101Lbqh101over 3 years ago
Sequel?

I also would enjoy reading a sequel. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
More please

A nice tale. another episode would be welcome.

PS.

What happened to Jimmy & Grace ?

HP

crazycujocrazycujoover 3 years ago
Fantastic

Hope you are going to continue the story! Thanks for sharing!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

what an erotic story, really hope it continues. does the witch have designs on Johan's foreskin, will he survive intact as she follows him on his quests

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