All Comments on 'Seductress'

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stroudlestroudleover 4 years ago
Wow, loved it

The mystery of who the two ladies were (I noted there were no names) along with the wonderful second person narrative, added to the overall dream like feeling. You left the question open ended as to was this reality or a dream which is perfect.

The kissing and delicate touches mixed in with raw passion and teasing was brilliant, I do love a nice feather.

One of your best Smokey, thank you.

Jc

gnome_mangnome_manover 4 years ago
Oooohh wweeee!!!

That was a hell of a story. It really grabbed me, dragged me in and kept me close. I could feel her pleasure and her pain, her struggles with her restraints. When Mistress cuddled up behind me - er, her, I shivered with anticipation. What was next?

It was really, really good.

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Writing lesbian erotica has become one of the most important things in my life. I try to make all my main characters at least reasonably three-dimensional, and balance out the Smokey Sagas between sweet, fluffy, light-hearted pieces with happy endings, and rough, sinister tale...