All Comments on 'Seeking Eternity'

Well written, good grammar, super hot sex! It's good as a stand alone, but I hope you continue the story.

it was a great story and i hope you add a next chapter so i can see what happens next

I really loved the story!! Sure hope university keeps stressing you out! ;)

Keep writing please. I really like this story. I look forward to learning more about her and why she became a slayer. I also want to know more about him. It seems he wants her as more than a hookup but the note is so cold :) I love it! But really, I like the details you put in. I felt like I was there at the fight in the end when she's waiting to die when Boris gets stabbed. I hope you will keep writing this!

Pls write more!

please keep going, this is amazing!

You're off to an amazing start!!! Can't wait for more!

Love this! Can't wait for more!

I hope you are going to continue this story I always love a slayer/vampire romance. What was it about him that made her so trusting and willing and why did he save her life? I would love for a continuation of this and to learn his name as they fall in love.

Keep posting!

Great start and look forward to more!

Great start to this series I can't wait for more silver_firefly....

:-)

Thanks for posting

I see this is an older story that you just added a chapter to, so I started at the beginning. This started out very well. I love stories with a strong female lead. But then she turned into a mindless fool as soon as a pretty face looks at her. I am hoping later chapters show that is a function of his vampiric ability or fate or some other supernatural feature.

Great editing and good sex, so good job. I loved the details around her revenge of Bram and how that drove her to her near demise. I look forward to the next chapter.