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doorknob22doorknob22almost 7 years ago
Awesome story.

Very well written.

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 5 years ago
Since you ask for comments

It was interesting how you structured the story; it could easily have been sweet, but then it suddenly morphed into bitter and violent, and then ended up sort of sweet again. Loneliness is a powerful force, and you seemed to capture it in one of its darker incarnations. I liked the story. Five stars from me, JB Edwards

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I'm a security consultant that specializes in threat assessment, risk management and physical security implementation. I've traveled the world, and had a lot of fun along the way. These are some of my stories. I would love to hear what you have to say about my stories. I...