All Comments on 'Senior Year Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

So glad you updated. I wanted more Of these two. I hope there is still more to the story even though they are headed back to college. You could go so many places with these teo characters. Great job and keep writing

holden_caulfieldholden_caulfieldalmost 8 years agoAuthor
Sorry for the delay

Sorry to keep you all waiting so long. This was actually written months ago, I just wasn't happy with some of the writing (actually I'm still not, if someone wants to volunteer to edit).

There will be 2 or 3 more parts, depending on how I split up the rest of the story. I appreciate any and all feedback, even constructive criticism, it really does motivate me to keep writing.

Reader777Reader777almost 8 years ago

I think you did a great job of portraying this relationship. It reads very well, is interesting and exciting and I feel like I know these two guys and how they feel. It's very realistic. Please keep it up. Thanks

mislaidthoughtsmislaidthoughtsabout 7 years ago

This story is really sweet. I'm kind of worried it's going to be a downer at the end (especially if it's based off real events) but the characters feel like real people and I like reading about how they navigate their relationship.

It's nice to read a story where the main character is still discovering his sexuality without resorting to a lot of cliché tropes.

It's been a while since you posted this chapter and while I would love to see it continue further, if this is all there ever is, I wanted to let you know that this story had an impact on me. It's very touching and both characters are very likeable without being perfect.

joelafayettejoelafayetteabout 6 years ago
Nice

Good job, man. I got erect and identified well with both characters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Quality

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I wish the author’s plan to write more chapters had happened. It feels like this story and these characters were abandoned in the middle with no conclusion. But it’s been 6 years so this is likely all we will get. Huge bummer.

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