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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I THINK YOU RUSHED POPPING THE MARRY ME QUESTION

Maybe in a third chapter that would have flowed naturally, but in this piece of work it was rushed and out of time with the plow of emotion. Women needed to return to their lives with their family. Maybe through text and on-line chats they could develop further emotional bonding.

A couple of finger fucks and a bit of muff diving does not a new and better relationship build.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Complaining about their dudes coming fast. In return they masturbate next to one another and as a result want to get married. Pretty fast transition. LOL.

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