All Comments on 'Sequences Ch. 04'

luv it luv it!!!

i loved it. you should write fabians story.

omg, this story is wonderful!!! could you please write an epilogue or something to show how life changed when he became free and what happened between him and daniel...please, it could provide closure to know what happens....and fabian's story would be a nice sequel cause we could still hear about sequence and daniel!

It was an okay story. The plot was a bit sketchy and the beginning wasn't explained well. More detail into how Sequence thought would make the story more believable and relatable. It wasn't made clear that Sequence was practically a masochist and if that was a result of being treated as a slave or being led to believe it was kindness. It was also unclear about how Sequence felt about it, because you made it sound as if he liked it and then hated it.

I coudn't stop reading it because I was hoping that Master/Daniel would realize that having Sequence meant more than just power. A sort of epiphany or redemtion, if you will. I was disappointed with the ending because I was expecting something else.

Overall it was good, but inconsistent.

I love how you capture the ambivalence of Sequence as he starts to realise that he's a sub & a masochist. You do a great job in showing the paradoxical freedom he experiences as he accepts himself.

Great story, great characters, great sex. All in all, very well done!

Great story, truely keep on writing, I love how the characters are so easily distinguishable. There personalitys are all so vivid. It took me a while to get into it because of how insane the storyline was. But overall I loved it.

Oh please write more! This is such a great story

Perfect ending, but I definately vote for a folow up chapetr! Show us sequences new position in the household, and in daniels life. Pretty please?

absolutely loved it, great job! same i can only give 5 stars!

Need better sex scenes

I LIKED IT please make another series

that was a blast...i gotta give it to you...you belong with the best. you certainly know what you are on about and you deliver it like the professional you are!

Touching & humorous, well done!