All Comments on 'Serendipitous Dominance'

by sunshinebunny

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 12 years ago
Nice!

I'm quite sure the 'Three Princes' would have loved this as much as I did! Five stars - thank you.

trentpersontrentpersonover 12 years ago
great

this was an amzing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fantastic!

This is the first of your submissions i've read, and i must say, its one of the better stories i've read here in quite some time. Crisp writing, strong description, characters that are motivated and show a little dimension (even for a short story) all show your talent as a author. I am particularly impressed by your ability to bring intimacy to what could have been a perfectly good BDSM yarn. The passion exhibited by your characters gave this piece depth and took it to a higher level. Well done. Well done, indeed.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Oh.Em.Gee

This one is easily your best. :)

Scotsman69Scotsman69about 12 years ago
Fascination interplay between them.

It feels very real. Shame it's just a tad overwritten. Still a 5 though.

RicWritesRicWritesabout 12 years ago
Just superb. That's all!

What a great exploration of emotion and attitude and role... the best I've read in years. Kudos!

submittingsparklessubmittingsparklesabout 12 years ago
hot

Thank you for writing some classy, classy filth. I loved this.

hugs and high fives!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Will there be more?

This is good--well written and erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I am deeply, deeply disappointed by one aspect of this story: It is six years old and still lacks a single sequel.

Otherwise, pretty much perfect....

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