by sunshinebunny
I'm quite sure the 'Three Princes' would have loved this as much as I did! Five stars - thank you.
This is the first of your submissions i've read, and i must say, its one of the better stories i've read here in quite some time. Crisp writing, strong description, characters that are motivated and show a little dimension (even for a short story) all show your talent as a author. I am particularly impressed by your ability to bring intimacy to what could have been a perfectly good BDSM yarn. The passion exhibited by your characters gave this piece depth and took it to a higher level. Well done. Well done, indeed.
It feels very real. Shame it's just a tad overwritten. Still a 5 though.
What a great exploration of emotion and attitude and role... the best I've read in years. Kudos!
Thank you for writing some classy, classy filth. I loved this.
hugs and high fives!
I am deeply, deeply disappointed by one aspect of this story: It is six years old and still lacks a single sequel.
Otherwise, pretty much perfect....