by cvandrews
OK, you are definitely on my favorite list just keep the fantasies fuming! Great second chapter and lucky me there are numbers 3 and 4 already posted!
5 stars at least! Appreciate the attention to detail and clean text few errors, typos, etc. very easy read. Good job well done! On to chapter 3.
Cheers
SAGE
1 star for Paul and Janey!!!
Seems Janey is Paul's slut!!
Too bad Janey's father cant see it
Absolutely no clue why Janey had to fuck Paul. Going even anal with him.
Matt should have kicked her out and send back to Paul.
On top of that she should have told Matt about her and Paul before seducing him (curious if he still would have wanted her).
people who expect porn to conform to their own ideas should find another writer who shares their tastes. it is pointless to criticize porn. just enjoy it, or move to the next story that strikes your fancy. 5/5 for this one.
Yes, avatar, It puzzles me why people go to a website whose name is, literally, Literotica.com and are then shocked to find depictions of non-marital, non-exclusive sex.