All Comments on 'Sergeant Mann'

by ElizabethDarcy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Stylish

I usually prefer dominant men, but this story was really well written and restrained. And there's something about persuasion and those clothes...

KittyKat147KittyKat147over 13 years ago
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Agree I like it too. Another chapter perhaps?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Tantalizing

Very nice! Another chapter would certainly be welcome.

ElizabethDarcyElizabethDarcyover 13 years agoAuthor
Thank you

I appreciate your praise. As for a sequel, there really isn't anywhere for this to go. Either they fall in love, or she's heartless enough for him to be worthless now. I may play with some similar characters, or if some unexpected muse strikes, there may be something similar, but I really can't see a sequel. Thank you for your praise, you make it fun to write.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I like it very much. Could do a sequel to Mattthew's escape maybe? Hmmm.

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