All Comments on 'Series of Unfortunate Events Ch. 01'

Please no more of this shit

All brothers and sisters should experience such uninhibited sex

"Limped dick little boys can't satisfy me so I just have to TOTALLY dominate and humiliate them" la dee dah, yada yada. Bullshit! How about, you know, TEACHING THEM HOW YOU WANT TO BE SATISFIED, BITCH!! You know... COMMUNICATE to them your needs. Usually you get far better results from people if you're NICE to them( WOW, what a concept) than being mean and cruel to them. No love by her here, nope. 2 *s, didn't like it much. 3rd wave feminism at its (sic) best.

WTF is CEAP ?? Is this an idiots way of saying CRAP ??? Well idiot before you criticise others why don't you go get an education & Then you may qualify to at least be a PRATT !!

Kill yourself femmy trash.

I actually really enjoyed the story and would love more. The descriptions were pretty good but most of all I loved the inclusion of a strap on dildo and some good face fucking that was really good. I look forward to some more with potentially some pegging or more teasing

I'm no feminist crazed Nazi. It's a sexual fantasy story of a girl who likes to be dominate in the bedroom. Perhaps this hit too close to home because you can't satisfy a woman? I don't know. It's not that serious fam.

What a SLUT.

HOPE YOU HAVE MORE CHAPTERS

i would have sprinkled tobassco sause all over my biug dick and rammed it balls deep in her butthole you feel me, so where she at doe.

Not much into bondage/domination, all that stuff, but some of the positions were quite literally impossible. It doesn’t need a sequel. Let it die here.

I have read way worse versions of this where the sister dominates the brother and it always borderlines on unnatural cruelty between family members.

THIS is not one of those stories and that's a relief. Albeit i am a bit confused by some of the tags since they do not have any bearing on the story itself.

There were minimal errors and for the most part it was well written.

It did feel like the story ended abruptly with purely foreplay. I mean, most women wouldn't be satisfied in this scenario with cumming one time, but that's only a minor issue.

I genuinely hope there will be sequels to this story

(i have no idea where all the harsh comments are coming from since i haven't seen comments of the like on other femdom oriented stories)

Evolve the relationship between the siblings with good chemistry and explore the dom/sub dynamic without stretching believability. Keep it to just two people lol and regarding the tags, was he supposed to be calling his sister Mommy? That would be interesting but you didn't explore that, so I'm very confused about why the story is tagged like that haha

I'm down for dominant women in the bedroom but I'm not down with blackmail especially when the person would be willing to fuck. I prefer your other works over this one but I'll wait for the next one's anyway if you write them.

Please continue this story it’s great and well written. It deserves to continue

This was amazing can we get a second chapter?

Sick Sister. Wuss Brother.

thanks for the femdom tag, so I knew not to waste my time.