All Comments on 'Servitude and Sluttiness Ch. 04'

Great stories. Can't wait for the next one.

Your punctuation needs work, and the plot is predictable and boring. Started off promising, but has since dipped below standard. Expected better. 2 stars.

I also find you knowledge of punctuation lacking. Sadly, a story that had so much promise has become a rather tiresome read. In your first chapter I was interested in your choice of words but even there you misspelt acclimated. If you printed the story off and read it out loud you would find many of these errors become obvious. Correct these and repeat doing draft on draft until satisfied with your story.

Sarah doesn't admit it but being Lady Miriams slut slave with orgasms as her bonus when Lady Miriam gives them to her makes her completetly dependent as a slave should be!Being given to the guests as sexual relief and entertainment is,as with everything she does, guaranteed maxiimum humiliation!Any pain or pleasure is strictly for Lady Miriams delights,sexual or otherwise,afterall she is just property!

Keep writing we love it.

the whole series got me real wet....imagined myself in the same situation. hope there will be more of this!!!

thanks for that hot nights!!!

hanna