by cj8000
Beautiful start with Beth and Kate ~ leaves us all wondering what comes next. Terrific Read!
Where did she set him up i read the story i didnt see where she set him up.
Atlanta,Ga
Hot! Not just sex and not drawn out - a very good mix. More, please!
Very solid entry into this genre of writing. It could have had a little bit more exposition, but how you did it was very well done. And if you had added more, it might have ruined the tone and exact color of the story. Either way, that's not important. What is important is that you have given us a very good story, very hot also! Keep up the good work.
Very nice, with the conversations being very realistic. Keep up the good work!