All Comments on 'Set Up'

by cj8000

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
GREAT START

MORE PLEASE,

WISH KATE WERE MY WIFE

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
hot stuff

yes more please, that was thz stuff dreams are made of

duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Sensuous!

Beautiful start with Beth and Kate ~ leaves us all wondering what comes next. Terrific Read!

bornagainbornagainabout 17 years ago
the set up

Where did she set him up i read the story i didnt see where she set him up.

Atlanta,Ga

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice!

Hot! Not just sex and not drawn out - a very good mix. More, please!

drsaltdrsaltabout 17 years ago
Not bad

Your content was decent, though it seemed a bit sudden.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Solid

Very solid entry into this genre of writing. It could have had a little bit more exposition, but how you did it was very well done. And if you had added more, it might have ruined the tone and exact color of the story. Either way, that's not important. What is important is that you have given us a very good story, very hot also! Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Set Up

Very nice, with the conversations being very realistic. Keep up the good work!

ErotonautErotonautabout 17 years ago
Nice debut

Look forward very much to seeing more of your work.

algolfcrazyalgolfcrazyalmost 2 years ago

Loved it.Hot story.More please

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