All Comments on 'Set Up & Tricked'

Proof read your content! Bad grammar, missing words, and the girls waltzed right through a LOCKED door.

Clearly the author is a premature ejaculator, because he finished before anything actually happened.

Everything Painful said and more. This was brutally awful. Please try again.

Get an editor to fix this then quit writing. It's awful. You aren't making sense. It isn't even a story, just a bunch of ideas but no outline.

Proof read your stories before posting.

This must be the biggest bag of crap I've read

on lit.

Two pieces in a row with same puerile writing style, including the same errors and mistakes. Give over, already!

It was.......

Sorry people. I was not paying attention. It will not happen again

It was getting good and then