All Comments on 'Seth and Lorelei Ch. 02'

Should make the chapters longer but all in all a really great story keep it up

I like the slow buildup between Seth and Lorelei. Lovely, clean writing. Maybe work on revealing more about Seth's character in the dialog, since Lorelei is so effortlessly fleshed out already.

I love the slow buildup between Seth and Lorelei. It's so Lovely..

I would love to reade more about them..

Best Regard

Sweden

I love the slow build and the style of writing. I look forward to reading the next installment. Great job.

Still waiting for Ch. 03!!!

Please make another one...

Wonderful buildup in Chapter 1; great story in Chapter 2. If Chapter 3 ups the level of eroticism as Chapter 2 did over Chapter 1, you will have one of the best incest stories on here.

Great story, so far.

very enjoyable to read literature wise, as well as the intended meaning. awesome work

Great story, I would have love to see where this would go in a chapter 3. Did you write any thing else inn the romantic section or as a writer what else have you written?

A pity. I assume that there will be no ch. 3

Good story.