All Comments on 'Setting Moon Ch. 08'

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willieonewillieoneover 11 years ago
Confused???

What has this got to do with previous chapters? I understand a little background may be in order for Ericka but a whole chapter seems a bit much! When do we get back to the Alpha and his mate?

123udontknowme123udontknowmeover 11 years ago
Rightly said willieone...

I don't see how this is completely relevant.. . I want to know more of Sam and his mate. I'm sure you'll soon tell us.. but... Yeah... I'll be waiting

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

im confused

MSBLING59MSBLING59over 11 years ago
INITALLY CONFUSED, YES

I THOUGHT I WAS READING ANOTHER STORY FOR THE FIRST PAGE THEN AFTER GOING BACK TO RE-READ THE LAST PAGE OF THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER I REALIZED ERIKA WAS TELLING ERIC ABOUT THE ORIGIN OF WEREWOLVES & VAMPIRES. A LIL FORE WARNING WOULD HAVE BEEN NICE. OVER-ALL GREAT STORY.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
I thought this chapter was great!

perhaps a line at the beginning noting the Ericka was telling a story, would have made it perfect, but I loved it. Thanks

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 11 years ago

I think this would have been better as a separate story.

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