All Comments on 'Setting Some Things Straight'

A glorious and wonderful rendition of what many of us would pay for...to be totally at her control for whatever she desired and denied our release until and only until she allowed it. I could almost taste her myself when she finally allowed him oral access to her sweetness. Delicious.

Lee

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Beautifully written, and extremely explicit and erotic. I could almost feel what he was feeling, and enjoy what she was providing.

And very erotic. I liked the build-up in the story, as well as the dialog. Looking forward to reading more from you.

Safe, sane and CONSENSUAL.