All Comments on 'Settling In Ch. 02'

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msboy8msboy8about 19 years ago
What Happened?

What happened to the time between Marlene unwrapping the digital camera at the end of chapter 1 and the 2 couples being in the midst of a 4-some in a hotel room at the beginning of chapter 2?

upforalmostanything2upforalmostanything2about 19 years agoAuthor
Something lost in translation

msboy you are right, part of the story got cut off in my submission. I submitted it again so please check back.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Something is missing

I guess by now you realize that you forgot a part of the story. I hope you can repair the error as I was enjoying the build up but feel I missed a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
movin on...

preamble said read ur other stories. site does not have any. text corrupt. your fault, the site, or gremlins? will check back.

upforalmostanything2upforalmostanything2about 19 years agoAuthor
RE: Movin On

My other stories are under the name upforalmostanything....no 2 at the end of the name. Somehow my account got screwed up I no longer have access to it. As far as the missing part of the story...see comment 'lost in translation'

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