All Comments on 'Seven Nights A'Dippin''

Good to see you back, Watching! The M Club series is one of my very favorite stories here, and this is just as high quality. Thanks!

A cracking good read. Funny witty realistic, well written, emotionally wide ranging, gripping, exciting, thrilling, entertaining

Excellent story very well crafted! Thanks for sharing!

Hey Watching Cloud, absolutely loved your story. I couldn't stop reading and wanting to know how their relationship continued to develop throughout their different adventures. It was funny, romantic, sexual and just great reading. Loved it. You are amazing!!!!

Fantastic story! Your usual attention to detail and realistic, likable characters make for a story that is well-written and funny, in addition to being erotic. It's also great to know you're continuing to write!

I agree totally with the positive comments already left here. This is a well-developed, well-written, engrossing tale that I couldn't put down until I reached the end.

I was a bit sorry to see the closeout at the end of the last page, though. I would have loved to have seen more, including what Rand and Eve will get up to at Mike and Annette's home while they were still away, and to see if they would be invited back for a couples night, as well as for the next get-together with the skinny-dipping friends that Mike and Annette alluded to. Who knows? -- perhaps their nudist group might include the couple who Rand and Eve watched through the window on Night 5.

And now that the 'nudity barrier' has been broken, there is also the question of how far Chuck, Becky and Max will continue to take their skinny-dipping. Lots of openings here.

Once again, GREAT JOB!

Very fun, thanks for sharing. Did you go dipping with the couple sitting in the dark, and how did you not jump out of your skin.

I figured out you would get a early picture at your competions

Watching Cloud, I didn't realise your the author of The 'M' club, I should have. I loved that story and the last seven nigjts

This reminds me a lot of my first girlfriend. We had neighbors with a pool that would go on vacation for an extended time. We would “watch” the pool. Never wore a suit. Great times,great story!

I love your work. Your stories are always so well written. I always wished there had been a follow up to The Class Nudist’

Masterly written...

I really love that you cast nudism in a much more realistic light than most Literotica stories.

After reading this story I looked at your submissions page and realised that I've read quite a few of your other stories and liked them.

Looking forward to more stories from you, and to reading the ones you've written that I haven't read yet.

I wish I could click on the 6th star. This was wonderfully written and shared. All the characters came to life and I could imagine how they looked and acted. Great job!

A lovely story! Beautifully written, fun and erotic.

Thank you.

Good job. Tons of imagination and cleverly put together. Loved it.

I may come back and reread it, just as I have--many times--for Class Nudist and The Nymph's Pool. Just like those other two, this one starts at exhibitionism and winds up, happily, in romance, leaving us both appreciating them as stand-alone stories, but also looking forward to sequels. Five stars, as usual. Congratulations on the prize.

Damn. Great Job!

Excellent Story! Great writing with a funtastic plot. Thank you for taking the time to put this out there. Stay safe, stay healthy. Just want you to be able to keep writing, haha.

The Nymph's Pool...one of my absolute favorites.

Thanks for this one.

Such sweet young things!

this is sooo hot and really awesome. Thanks and five stars to you. Should be more.....very horny

What a good story should be. Thanks for sharing.

I liked the story, but our dauntless main characters definatelyly had the most difficult challenge. Why nothing about Becky's teams trials?

Thanks for sharing.

Cute & sexy at the same time :)

Love your stories they are soooooo great! When will you write the next one?? And I wonder if you can write a second chapter to class nudist

I came here for a sexy time.

In return I genuinely, legitimately CRIED. In a fuck dammit I need a Rand.

Sexy and wholesome? Loved it. A great love story.

Thanks for a great story!

The best erotic stories are, first of all, great stories. This is believable, fun, well written, well paced, and, yes, very erotic. I shall be looking - hard - at what else you have written. Great story.

Well done there not many stories on here that i cant put down this is one, added to favorites and will read again, well written , makes you want to keep going to next pool to see what happens , a well worth 5 stars give keep up the reads i be looking at your other stories that interest me next thanks keep up the great writing.

Fucking Brilliant! I actually felt nervous for them several times.

This was up there with class nudist and many more.

My heart raced for many of the stories as my adrenaline pumped through my body. I was cheering for them, worrying for them, embarrassed for them, and excited for them, especially for their budding relationship.

The idea of going there in the daytime did cross my mind twice, but your wonderful pros had me forgetting that idea quickly and following along till the very end, and yes, trying to figure out how they got the picture.

Thank you for adding this gem to your collection and reminding me that I need to go skinny dipping as it has been far too long.

Loved this story. Well written, challenging dare and very sensitive to the characters

Just read, what a read, really great. Shame so far no continuation of Bear Queen friends rivary.

Excellent Story!

The nudism was real. As a nudist, I know that the first time is nerve wracking but within minutes, it becomes total freedom. One can sense a lifetime of nudity for this young couple.

The love part was really romantic. The first kiss was when they were nearly nude. The lovemaking progressed quickly but at a believable rate.

The dares were way beyond what we would have done at that age, but I loved the competiveness of Becky and Eve.

This is extremely well written. Very entertaining and enjoyable. The characters are all believable and the budding romance is hot. Thanks...

Fun story, well written, but definitely lacking from an erotica standpoint. I would suggest a disclaimer that there is a surprising lack of intimacy.

Actually, this was a very intimate story. Bookmarked among my favorites.

Excellent! Very well written. Good plot and just plain fun.

Very well done! This would make a great movie!

GGreat plot, wonderful characters. It needs to be a movie! Enjoyed it. Immensely.

One of the very best stories I have read on literotica! Thanks for a fun and enjoyable read. I suspect that many of your readers could identify with elements of this story.

If I could leave more than five stars, I would: superb story. Believable, fun, and once again proving love can hit you over the head when you're least prepared for it.

So romantic and erotic. Well done.

Excellent story. It would have been nice to have an explanation of why Chuck and Becky got two pictures at the same house.

Nothing like getting naked in the summer, young, skinny dipping with your first ever girlfriend!! Great story that brought back great memories.

I look at high score stories sometimes and think wtf, how does this rubbish get such a high score? NOT here! THIS is appropriately high. Perfect balance of sex, story and relationship. So difficult to get that balance right, and this story is the measuring stick.

I loved it - the sense of nervousness and excitement is so real

Such a great story! Thank you!

I really really really love this story. Thank you!

Absolutely a great story, the freedom to skinny dip and the excitement of young love is well made here. Thank you!

Excellent story!

Great buildup and reveals.

Keep up the excellent work. You have a lot of talent as a writer.

reads very organically. plot isn't forced or unbelievable in the slightest. really great work.

Great story, brought back some old memories of skinny dipping. Oh to be young again!

My wife and I have a habit of hopping the fence after hours to swim nude in hotel pools, usually when we're on holiday and staying at a different hotel. We've been busted a few times, but all they do is make us leave. When we do get caught, it's usually because they notice us on the security cameras. But usually we just swim naked undetected for a while, then move on to the next hotel.

Very hot!

One of the absolute best stories I've ever read on Literotica. Well written, just enough detail to make it erotic and real. Nicely done!

Fun little story that rolls along 😀

Firstly, I love the story, but you made another error, Becky would have lost her first round also because the first person that posed with them in their underwear was their uncle and Max said nobody you know. ,

Just to edit my last comment, it was Chuck‘s brother that post with Becky’s team, and that would’ve been a disqualification as they knew him

this was great pacing. I loved her attitude and his naievete.