All Comments on 'Seven Stories'

Your story has definately grabbed my attention. Anxiously looking forward to the next chapter.

ready for chapters 2-7 anytime

some poetry in your writing is fine but not much is needed for chapters this short.

Wow, I am pretty surprised at all the readers so quickly. I had no idea that so many would come across my story so fast. Thanks all of you and I appreciate the time that everyone has given to my story. Comments are welcome and i am working on the second installment now. It will be longer than the first to be sure. :P

interesting framework. you have my attention.

two little flaws,

1) some grammatical mistakes that slightly disrupted the flow of the read

2) too short

otherwise great start, and looking forward to the rest

Not a bad start...